You Are A Poet Of Reality Afzal !! / Tamara Jay Hanaring

you are a poet of reality afzal !! / tamara jay hanaring

Dear Peace Dreamer !! a true call for all to smile.. and yes the smile which ease the difficult ways, It release the hate in others hearts ..that smile which take you the extra mile. Tamara / PALESTINE

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YOU ARE A POET OF REALITY AFZAL !! My critiques on few of your poems Afzal ! Tamara
A Symbol Of Pride a new thought about pride you brought in this beautiful poemthe pride of that tower who refuse to fall and if one day the days will conquer his way in standing still watching the sky.. the valleys and the hillshis pride prevent him from the fall as the unique ones has to have a deficit in their characterthe beauty in being not whole.the pride of that deficit make the deficit a complete trait. The poem is impressive and perfectly done of course. Melodious one with good flow.
Age Counts a beautiful poem Afzal Shauq !! and it let me smile.. that is the need of all hearts to be heard by other hearts, but the poets do not grow old.. their smiles decrease the days and it stop their countyour poems are an other new bon of you still he need to grow, , I guess you are in teenager timeand this shows that.. some how it will pull the bees to your tree.. here you create from an end start as all the good poets are able to end the end to stand when they fall..to be young once time again.. again done in poetic flow well done.
A Dream Or True Reality..? a real poem for a real reality.. what you saw was not a dream but the humankind whom you have seen in that jungle while attacking their kindI wonder some time for who claim their freedom if they truly civilized and suddenly I find that no they returned to their caves eating their brothers fleshand that food was not just to fill their hungry stomach.. it was the greed which has to be always fed.. in the jungle I was seeing that sorrow of the eyes of the animals guys while they see their mates killed by harsh mean.. but what we see those days.. the people just walk away while seeing the genocide which daily happened in every wayI wonder for who gave the right for those who thought that they have the right to occupy the empty cities after killing her children who left only their laughter sound.. love it.
White Flag which s sign of peace, I loved that way of gathering your feelings and all colors in one piece which colored white to wave for peace.. a profound and sincere words wonderfully said.. and it s only your ability I think dear Afzal ! to write this way.
Is This Love? a beautiful poem with a beautiful moment for wondering.. and a question which you lead us to it asking while pondering.. how the hearts are placed in others hearts.. that strange power which pulled some to otherswhat a strange phenomena is thatthanks for letting us see some thing all they love.

Friendly Smile . a beautiful loving poem.. and let me say .in the same poetic way to support your idea ahead .
Dear Peace Dreamer !!

a true call for all to smile.. and yes the smile
which ease the difficult ways, It release the hate in others hearts ..that smile which take you the extra mile. the smile has a taste of the sweetest bike, it carries you so high in others eye.. it is the love s kingdom queen
it is wetting every dry it shines other s face..
it is the magic in the eyes.. a gift from the skies that smile
which painted on one s face
and spring from a deep place..
it is your sign..
it leaves on one the beauty of your trace.. it is the stranger s password to a new place
come for a while take some smiles
and distributed to other needy guys .. My above poem is for dear Afzal ! hope you and your poetry reader fans like my points. Thanks very much to God for finding you and giving me a chance to read your poetry all. PALESTINE
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